Wrote another poem. whats your opinion. should i keep writing? im 16?

At your age, It is not a question of whether anything that you write is any good, but that you write prolifically. Practice, practice, practice. Learn to dissect your work and become your own worst critic. Find a sentence you like? Take it apart and try to figure out why you like it and then write one yourself on an entirely different subject. Don't like it? Take it apart and figure out why. This is the way you get good and develop your own style.